Tag: description
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the carnival
In the night, stars dance across the ceiling as a neon parade swarms the circle. Vibrant diversity rings in each color, in each promenade. A mass of euphoria, of ecstasy, takes over each swing, each dance, each act as they contort themselves, risk themselves, outcast themselves all for the sake of twinkling under the stars.…
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Passage #1
Slowly, the procession unfolds like floating through a cloud. The crystal altar where the queen, in a leafy, forest green gown, and foliate cape, and foresty crown of crystals waits. Her lush, brown hair billows to her waist. COMMENT SUGGESTIONS FOR IMPROVEMENT
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Character Worksheet
This is not necessary, but this can help you if you’re someone who is a planner. Biological Facts Full Name: Reason for Name: Birthday: (Day, Month, Year) Reason for choosing this date: Zodiac: Mother: Father: Siblings (if any): Significant other(s) (if any): Children (if any): IDENTITY-Focus Facts Sexuality: Height: Weight: Hair: (Color, Length Type, Texture)…
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The Dos and Don’ts of Description
As writers, and as we get older in general, description is vital in what we write. Pay attention to detail, they always say. As we age, people expect our attention to specificities to get better and better. Take this for example: She had short, curly brown hair. Her eyes were blue. While it’s okay to…